Today I sang and gazed at stars
Sitting on a worn out bridge
A wave or two came to be with me
As I sang my lonely song
I sang about my long lost hope
I sang about my long lost will
Did I cry ..dont know for sure
But I sure wept through my song
Minutes and hours went tickling by
Still I sang with all my heart
It was a song of broken dreams
It was a song of utter pain
Riding the winds ..and through the clouds
An eagle came and caught my song
he went past me with a mocking smile
And to took my song a place unknown
The night was dark and the sea in pain
The big black bird was no were near
I felt alone without my song
It was all I had to call as mine
A flash was seen in the midnight sky
With the brightness of a million stars
Along came a nymph divine
And started to sing her song of joy
Deep inside my dieing soul
I felt a song welling up
It was not of broken dreams
It was not of utter pain
I started to sing my new found song
The song of hope…the song of love
I turned to thank that lovely nymph
For giving me my song of joy
She smiled at me and kissed my lips
And sang these words and went away
"I am the love that will make you free"
"Free as the eagle which took your pain"
3 comments:
loved diz!!!! beautiful poetry! well worded and beautiful a concept too! loved it susru! n welcome to de world f blogging :) keep em coming!!!!
beautiful!!
especially the idea
sometimes in life we cry ovr things we loose, not knwin tht, tht particular thing was actually th cause of our pains
and tht better things await us everytim we lose
everythin happens for a reason.
soo jus let ur mind free...
and pen in more of such gud wrks..
:-)
"I am the love that will make you free" "Free as the eagle which took your pain"
great words conveying great feelings........
I dont know wat else to write Susru except that it is awesome...
wonderful daa....
n when i read these superb words gotta say it ignited similar vibrations within me too....
cheers buddy carry on blogging....
lookin forward for more frm u
[:)]
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